by xPerfect Chaosx Dec 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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All I can see is the swirling sand |
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Its awesome I love this you portray the character very well. |
by David
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Maybe in your next poem add a few more words to each line. this will help. just a few. but still don't get me wrong. this was excellent. |
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Oh jeeze Danieru. One of your best ever!!! I love it so much!! *hugs you* So E-mail me already!!! |
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I could definitely relate to this!! and i love it!! it shows great emotion + a ton of talent! awesome poem!! keep it up =]]. _Mya_ |
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Lovely! I loved it! |