Comments : A Poet's Pen Is False Release

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie loved this! I am just blown away with your talent! You really are amazing! I am your #1 fan! Your Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very clever. Flows well. I like this alot. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    What a wonderful write, dear friend. You have truelly captured the essence of the written word.

    "A poet's pen is false release,
    The ink and paper outlet brief.
    Though poem penned will time withstand
    It traces not a lover's hand.

    Excellent Stanza. This is by far, my fave of yours.

    Absolutely lovely.
    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, it is greatly written.very well done.a 5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by john graver

    GOOD WRITE. ONCE AGAIN AWESOME WORDS. i LOVE WORDS!

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    Amazing. Simply amazing. I don't know what else to say. This flowed so perfectly...there's, honestly, no critizism for this. And I absolutely LOVE poems about poetry! This was perfect...and so true! I loved it!! Excellent write!! Love,

    -` Liz

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Wow ..I can easily see wre your daughter inherited her talent

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    My fist comment was quite lame, I was tired after working my night shift....
    This is my favorite poem of yours although, I like them all. This is perfect. Flawless from beginning to end. EXCELLENT WRITE!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow, this poem blew me away. It was so beautiful, and so true, I'm glad someone still understands the need for a meaningful heart to heart talk. I absolutely loved this, it was flawless in everyway, and your words were so elegant and wonderful, great work.

    --Steph

  • 10 years ago

    by erin

    Wow can u say next shakepeare! this poem has a certain flow to it that just takes your breath away! its fab-u-lous!!!

    luv 4ever an a day, erin

  • 10 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wow! That was an amazing poem, and though this is a comment for a contest, I simply can't critique it. It's beautiful and the flow and rhyme are perfect. All I can truly do is epxress how much I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this. You really said it well, we can WRITE our thoughts but it's not the same as FEELING them!
    Amazing debbylyn....amazing!
    Charisma*

  • 10 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Love it! great word choices!

  • 10 years ago

    by masked_senses

    That was a great one ...5/5

  • Hi
    this is the first time i read anything by you and to be honest iam very impressed..ur truely talented and i just loved this poem..
    i am so adding you to my fav...

  • Love the slant rhyme.. wonderful job.. Keep it up, 5-5

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Lost for words.....really like what you
    written....all very good. 6/5
    Brill......

    Barry

  • 10 years ago

    by Never URs

    This is really creative good job!! keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Great job!!! i love it..very well written.. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Corinne

    Another 5er.

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Read this again! I liked it very much the first time.....now I read slower
    MMMmmmm....it is very true, passionate, very beautiful....yet something you can't grasp with a pen

    5 is just to low....Adams comment is
    worth mentioning....you have to be kind to the blind! 100/5
    well done....