Thabk you ror such a great piece of work, and thanks for fighting for what you believe in

Truer words are yet to be spoken..
Great job on capturing the imagry..

Atleast there is one person who stands for the soldiers. instead of slamming the government and saying the soldiers don't want to be there, this poems says something different. something that needs to be said

your servant:
david

Great poem and i agree with david im glad you could put this to words so well keep at it and again a great poem

nessa

I like this poem. It's really quite good actually. I live in Australia and I'm wanting to join to RAAF. I so want to be a pilot. But it doesn't bother me what I do as long as I get to fight. Still got a couple of more years for me though :(

Your poem says a lot about YOU and the reason you are a soldier. thanks for all the support