Another great poem! Ive now read all the one's youve submitted! :)
Anyways this poem, i like how oyu drew me in by describing a normal baby, it created good imagery and you could see this cute little baby in my eyes. Then i like how you suddenly turn and say its all a disguise. It made me think subconciously, how? why? and that in turn made me want to read more. So well done on the first stanza! Then you og on, explaining it self a bit, the last two stanza's you used so many different words just to discribe it. It was really great and havnt read a poem like this before. So yeah well done! :) xx
Lovely...great!..Excellent!..Beautiful imagery!..i really loved the way this 1 flowed!...it's a very different angle of love u've put in this peice of work and yet..it's wonderful!
5/5 as u deserve it!
Haha. Wow, that's awesome. You're really really good at this writing thing lol.
I have to say I didn't expect Cupid to be the one displayed in this poem.
But you sure did nail him.
Oh! and I'm adding you to my favorites. =)