Comments : Demonic Angel

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    && I love it. totally great. 5/5 beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Chong

    I've never thought of love that way before. How beautiful. 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Oh my, this is amazing, i love the flowing and how the rhyming works. It's an amzing poem! Thanks for the comment!

    x

  • 10 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Very nice 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by StormyStar

    O my word, i love this one, i totally agree. i wish i could write like you, it's ah*maz*ing! i love this!!

  • 10 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Owh, why thank you.. your really good too, and i like what you have to say about mine. you have your own style of writing and i love it.. it's not like anyone eles i have read..

  • 10 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Another great poem! Ive now read all the one's youve submitted! :)
    Anyways this poem, i like how oyu drew me in by describing a normal baby, it created good imagery and you could see this cute little baby in my eyes. Then i like how you suddenly turn and say its all a disguise. It made me think subconciously, how? why? and that in turn made me want to read more. So well done on the first stanza! Then you og on, explaining it self a bit, the last two stanza's you used so many different words just to discribe it. It was really great and havnt read a poem like this before. So yeah well done! :) xx

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Love it! ... it is great...... great style & wording & flow! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Alison

    I like this one a lot. i especially like the last two stanzas with all the adjetives that rhyme 5/5 good job =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    To be honest this poem left me just a bit confused, and your rhyming sounds a bit forced. However, I love the hidden character you've included.

  • 10 years ago

    by Esther

    Lol, this is funny, and i wonder who ur on bwt, its like cupid, but ya no i mite have missed the whole point of the poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lovely...great!..Excellent!..Beautiful imagery!..i really loved the way this 1 flowed!...it's a very different angle of love u've put in this peice of work and yet..it's wonderful!
    5/5 as u deserve it!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Lisa

    Haha. Wow, that's awesome. You're really really good at this writing thing lol.
    I have to say I didn't expect Cupid to be the one displayed in this poem.
    But you sure did nail him.
    5/5.
    So good.
    Oh! and I'm adding you to my favorites. =)
    -Lisa.

  • 10 years ago

    by Maisie Martin

    That's a really different way of looking at it, and I like different things. I like how you changed styles.

  • 10 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    This is really good keep it up (:

  • 10 years ago

    by I walked into my nightmares

    :D it sorta describes me except with out the blue eyes, little baby part, and curly blond hair :D

  • 10 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    I adored it. :]
    very very very good.

    <33Loveeee
    Star the Stripper