Well this was very touching. the guy you love will know soon enough. the title of this i say should be 'afraid of love'. well thats wat i think it should be.

i love the last paragraph the most. it had the most feeling and dred. stand up to your feelings and look him in the eye. tell him how you feel.

5/5 again and always. David

I really like this. its very personal and a lot of people can relate to this. Keep up the good work.

x

I love this poem. Its so cute, not to mention sad..*sob sob*..i feel your pain. Luv Chrissie

Okay its a pretty good poem, im not sure about the flow of it, i mean i think it could use a little more work. The content---surberb, i really enjoyed it and it really seems as if its truly from the heart. well i look forward to reading more of your work.

I didnt really like it it wasnt like idk there seemed not to be alot of emotion in it like if you tapped into your right side of your brain and put more emotion into it would be 10000000 times better
but yeah it was very blah

Very nice poem, and thank you for the comment on mine. if you want any suggestions, try rhyming. i can't really rhyme either, but it mixes it up if you rhyme on some of them. im working on that, and theres this website called rhymezome.com that will help find rhymes. anyway this is an excellent poem, glad to have you on my favorites

Thx, hey how do you get those icons in the corner?

I like this poem, so direct and many times i felt like that when walking down a hallway!
by the way thanks for the comment!

Its beautiful.

Very very cute poem! :) Can tell that every word comes from heart :) Beautiful poem :)

Wow that definetly is how I feel, beautiful poem! :D
5/5 from me!

Good poem
very nicely written with a great flow.
I really like what you wrote as for someone it might be meaningless of how we love someone and cannot leave without them.
this remind me of a famous quote that says "love is not finding a perfect person, but to find an imperfect person perfectly"
great job and you really deserve a 5/5

Well i personally like poems that rhyme better. but i guess i like this one because it reminds me of myself from a while back and i like poems i can relate to. good job!

Omg. I think that is sooo awesome, and very cute I like it bunches
for sure 5/5 You keep up the good work too.
=]

You really captured to emotions of being afraid, although it seemed you didn't have a lot to rhyme with... Perhaps you did this purposely? Either way, you have an excellent poem here.

This is so meaningful girl yu hav a gift lol i lvu ti dn plz keep writtin more ther really gud

I don`t like how you repeated "walking with you ." It dulled the poem for a moment , but you captured emotion in this short poem . I liked it (:
..__MiNDYY

Very nice and emotional poem. Great job and yeah a lot can relate to that.
cheers, josh

Hey sweet

thank you for your message..
well sweet i think this poem wood be one the best to just send him it.. not wit a letter or nothing just this poem..
your being honest about how you feel and its so clear in the poem..

xhx

This poem relates to me i loved your poem. take care.