Okay its a pretty good poem, im not sure about the flow of it, i mean i think it could use a little more work. The content---surberb, i really enjoyed it and it really seems as if its truly from the heart. well i look forward to reading more of your work.
I didnt really like it it wasnt like idk there seemed not to be alot of emotion in it like if you tapped into your right side of your brain and put more emotion into it would be 10000000 times better
but yeah it was very blah
Very nice poem, and thank you for the comment on mine. if you want any suggestions, try rhyming. i can't really rhyme either, but it mixes it up if you rhyme on some of them. im working on that, and theres this website called rhymezome.com that will help find rhymes. anyway this is an excellent poem, glad to have you on my favorites
very nicely written with a great flow.
I really like what you wrote as for someone it might be meaningless of how we love someone and cannot leave without them.
this remind me of a famous quote that says "love is not finding a perfect person, but to find an imperfect person perfectly"
great job and you really deserve a 5/5
thank you for your message..
well sweet i think this poem wood be one the best to just send him it.. not wit a letter or nothing just this poem..
your being honest about how you feel and its so clear in the poem..