This is awesome... i luvs it lots!!!

Incredible and powerful, uniquely written and simple poem. Just outstanding.
Not one error, not one misuse of grammar etc... that I could see (however I would have had a little more punctuation but what you had was still outstanding) I don't care what anyone else says, this poem is going on my favorites.

5/5
~Stephen White

Nice poem :D

Great poem.
Deep, meningful, full of emotions.
Like the flow.
A pleasure to read.
Take care

This is so beautiful, really meaningful, i love it =]
thanks for the comment btw
xxx

Hey thans for mycomment this is the first poem of urs i have read i think this is great im gonna read more x x