This is so passion-fueled, which makes it a really beautiful poem. great work! keep it up! xXx

This is so sweet, it made me smile. 5/5!

Awww!!!
Austin, this is beautiful!!
I wish boys new how to write like this
were I'm from!!
I loved the flow and the imagery.
It shows how much you really pay attention to her
nice job!
xoxo kaila