This was good! But there's a couple mispelling.

You said "And know body can come between us" it's nobody.

And you said tell instead of untill. But over all great poem.

Very nice poem. I like it.

This is a cute poem...its very sweet..i like it.

It sounds like you found someone very special,your poem is very heartfelt.

Hey ashley. I apperchate your comments. and if you check your private massages(if you haven't already I gave you some opions. this one is good.

I love this poem! it is very well written!

Great poem Ashley. Thanks for commenting on mine! Your a talented writer. Keep up the hard work!
~Arie