5 seconds

by Loren   Apr 22, 2007


Its like the world froze for just a quick moment.

Like it had turned from winter to spring.

Everything and anything had hushed silently,

as if u walked into a library.

As if everything had turned from black and whit to color.

Like a mother holding her newborn,

I feel happy inside.

So happy inside I wanted to cry.

It was better than money;

worth more than gold;

this feeling I feel can't be bought or sold.

A touch,
that I never thought would be.

A touch,
for I thank the.

For he has given me,

A touch,
that i love so much.

It was almost like a small piece of heaven;

a kiss that lasted five seconds.

please comment on my poem thanks.

-Loren

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