You write gorgeous poems. that's almost all i can say because it is perfectly true. this one is so calming and inspiring it is amazing. your poems flow perfectly, so beautifull penned. 5/5
gabriella

Wonderful. I really loved this poem.
Great inspirational life-life-while-
you-got-it poem. Well done!
God Bless 5/5
<3Tay^__^ily

Very Very good! I actually sung it to myself lol it sounded better well with the rhythm I was singing it to it sounded good the only part that stood out to me was this

whisper prayers with hollow eyes
to cleanse a soul thats rotten

^^ but otherwise good poem

Lovely poem. I really liked it:) 5/5

Ugh you are just sooo good at rhyming! I love your stuff. I'm going to add you to my favorites, cause your good. Check out my stuff if you have a chance.