The word coice was excellent. It keept my intrest all the way though it. The flow was perfect. well penned and strong clear emtion. Good work 5/5

I don't really understand this poem that well.
Will you explain it to me?
But other than that.
I think it's good, your format is.
Only, the second stanza last sentence
Seemed a wee bit forced.
Nothing big, really.
If you explain the poem to me,
I would gladly give out another comment :]

Ignited flames of hatred,
Extinguished, but left with coal,
my favorite part

this is awsome.. its short but strong.. lots of emotion also.. great flow and rythme!

I get what you mean.
There's a lot of mystery going on in this poem.
I like it.
Lol.
I wish I could give you another 5/5. Lol.

Wow.
This poem was simply fabulous. When you write, you write with such vivid detail - I had pictures playing in my mind while reading it. The flow was flawless & your word usage was great.

"The fire from her shadowed eyes,
Burns deep inside her soul,
Ignited flames of hatred,
Extinguished, but left with coal,"

^ My favorite stanza, by far. You're a wonderful writer, keep it up! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.