Things go to far. = things go too far.

our love for you you simple forgot.
= our love for you... you simply forgot.

other's = others'

Great poem m'dear. Strong, beautiful... resonating. Nicely penned. Nice flow, nice word use, beautiful meaning... I just loved it. The more i read it, the more I sinked deeper into it.

Good job, m'dear.
5/5
~Stephen White

This was an excellent poem. It flowed and rhymed nicely. It was a pleasure reading it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

"In the cold light of mourning,
I see you for what you are,
a coward, a child, never a man,
for you let things go too far"
Amazing!...perfectly written!!....so deep and well penned!!..kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

I loved the message and the style of this poem.You did a good job.Is it a true story?

One of the better ones that i have read, i really like how you start the poem and end the poem the same way, i dont know those ones are just the best to read, well done, 5/5

----sin

Aaaaaaaaaaaaah, great work.. nicely done.. last stanza touched my heart. take care 5

Hey hun it was sooo GOOD!!! i love;

a coward, a child, never a man,
for you let things go too far.

its sooo deep and yet soo true for so many of them!!
great penning!!

xoxo Lucy

I really liked how you opened and closed with the same stanza, gives a good sense of closure. great use or words, nicely done!

Ashley this well thought out pice could be interpreted a few different ways. It is always tough to loose someone in your life whether they were close family or friend or not. We each cope differetnly, coping mechanisms depend on how we react to the possitive and negative factors brought about by a death. To come to a complete understanding about what a person's life was like after they have passed can many times bring shock, pain and sadness to the loved ones left behind.
oh yes and you titled this piece perfectly!!

luv ya girly!! Congrts!!

sorry I was very busy yesterday normally I do post my bragg compliments in the poems comment section...thanx for reminding me.