I agree it was going pretty good, be glad when you finish it, let me know I want to read it all at once. your friend Tracy

Excellent poem Alex, great job,I enjoyed the finished,keep up great work, your friend Tracy
5/5

They way you wrote this poem was like drawing a picture for your readers, that is a really important thing, and not always easy to do, keep it up girly.
~Ally~

Thanks that's awesome.

This poem was so cute.

Dressing up is key, to go trick or treating with me, I may be too old, but I don't care, I'll dress up, and do my hair.

I loved this part because it related so much to me. I still go trick-or-treating every year with my friends (though so of the houses stopped giving up candy ^.^). Your never to old to have fun! *5/5*

Alyson

Cute poem..great till nw..u've penned this one beautifully..perfect picture...great work
Kp writing!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Very touchy. sweet and truth feelings. you have great talent take care 5/5