Comments : The autumn leaves.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    I agree it was going pretty good, be glad when you finish it, let me know I want to read it all at once. your friend Tracy

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem Alex, great job,I enjoyed the finished,keep up great work, your friend Tracy
    5/5

  • They way you wrote this poem was like drawing a picture for your readers, that is a really important thing, and not always easy to do, keep it up girly.
    ~Ally~

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex

    Thanks that's awesome.

  • 10 years ago

    by Allison

    This poem was so cute.

    Dressing up is key, to go trick or treating with me, I may be too old, but I don't care, I'll dress up, and do my hair.

    I loved this part because it related so much to me. I still go trick-or-treating every year with my friends (though so of the houses stopped giving up candy ^.^). Your never to old to have fun! *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Cute poem..great till nw..u've penned this one beautifully..perfect picture...great work
    Kp writing!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Very touchy. sweet and truth feelings. you have great talent take care 5/5