Wonderful work...n i can sooo relate..excellently penned!.....great write..n i love the way u've expressed emotions thru this 1!!.love it!...give it a 5/5!..nice job!

Whats great about this is lots of people can relate.. i sure can!.. Great show of emotions.. 5/5

Nice work! Shows the battle between your mind and heart.. like the theme! Great poem. Keep up the good work! :)

Wow this is amazing! I love the ending too! excellent work! well done! the flow was good! keep writing! I enjoyed this poem! :)

Please just let this be what you want,
Cause you are all that I need,
Just you in my life
And then it will be complete.

nice ending, well finished. I love poems i can relate to and this i can definatly do. Well done keep it up :) once again 5/5

Again wonderfully writen, and perfect word choice, brillantly thought out stong heart felt emtion, and excellent flow. again another job well done, 5/5

Wonderful poem...very well written..filled with emotions and clearly described....powerful write...and flowed smoothly
Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Another great poem that i can totally relate to... its so hard being ignored then told you are everything... makes you think alot!

well done tho, i love your writing!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

I wasn't big on it. It's like how I described the other one just being thoughts rushing through your mind. 2.