Comments : First Song

  • When I read the title I thougt it was going to be way different to this.
    I absolutely love, love this poem.
    Out of one little picture you captured this big thing.
    The imagery was great.
    5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 10 years ago

    by Jen

    I liked it :) that picture is so cute,
    tis amazing how yooh have got such a great poem outta just one pic ^_^
    Great as always 5/5 :)

    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    This paints such a wonderful picture for the minds eye. Excellent job. Great imagery.

    One by one, their small noses point upwards
    Tipped ears perk up, fragile yet strong
    Harmonious howls and shrill acute barks
    As the wolf cubs sing their very first song

    I really loved this stanza. It is perfect :)
    Take care love Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    The description in this was really done well, I think it was the description and the way you played out the scene that did this poem so well Great job I gave it a five and I don't give 5s alot lol keep up the good work Plot121

  • 10 years ago

    by Chad Campbell

    I was very impressed with the visual imagery this poem envoked when I read it. Its was both natural and mystical. Well written!

  • 10 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I dunno but for some reason i just absolutly adore wolfs, maybe its their mythical presence, or their ferral fury when you get their pray everything about them is amazing :) i love this poem :) I have a different one the way, and i was suprised to see my x coment on my poem :S dunno what to think of her comment 'i do care' anyway this poem is great as always 99/5 :P

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    How innovative! Indeed, this is something to be proud of. I loved how it progress in a way which keeps me reading it through with a rather wonderful, mysterious plot and intensifying atmosphere. 'Twas well-worth my time. Simply a joy to read! Well done, ma'dear! Keep them coming. :) Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    OH! The Tagalog poem is about a person getting confused with the stares and glances of another person. While being astounded, she realized the sole 'reason' of this and found herself falling for this individual. It's quite sweet! That's why I decided to post it back in its original language/version. (It wouldn't sound good and would lose its profundity when translated to English.) =) Thanks for the comment, sweetie! Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhhhhh how beautiful!
    When I viewed the picture, I was already smiling and thinking 'I'm going to love this, it's about wolves'
    And you certainly did the picture justice!
    Flawless flow, beautiful imagery and enjoyable word choice and rhyme scheme.
    I adore this!

  • 10 years ago

    by moonlil

    This is really beautiful. I liked the words you used in that poem. Great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    What's not to be proud of? It's so fabulous! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by e l flo

    You should be proud of this piece. it is absolutely incredible. i'm so happy for you. you have grown so much since you first started writing at this site. it is absolutely incredible.

    love it.

    5/5.
    Erin

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    I wonder how glad i would be if you could share with me why you are proud of this piece of work. Its a gr8 poem. i loved it

  • 10 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Written very well. I loved it. 5/5 Keep up the good work
    Check mine out please

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    You have a lot of reason to be proud of this piece Gem. Not a lot of ppl can write about animals and still be as poetic as when writing about love. But this is outstanding! I completely loved it! Ahh, the talent! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 10 years ago

    by Jen

    A beautiful poem, i really enjoyed reading it

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Unbelievable! That was really good.
    I wonder, is there a topic that you can't write about. I don't think so, you're great.

  • 10 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    You have every reason to proud of this poem. It is FANOMINAL!!! I'm just not sure if it should be under the dark section though. It's more of a beautiful nature piece.

    5/5

    Great job!!

    Josie

  • 10 years ago

    by gabriella

    Thanks for commenting me. gem ur poems are soo good. you could have a cureer writting poems u are so inspirational keep writting!