The description in this was really done well, I think it was the description and the way you played out the scene that did this poem so well Great job I gave it a five and I don't give 5s alot lol keep up the good work Plot121
I dunno but for some reason i just absolutly adore wolfs, maybe its their mythical presence, or their ferral fury when you get their pray everything about them is amazing :) i love this poem :) I have a different one the way, and i was suprised to see my x coment on my poem :S dunno what to think of her comment 'i do care' anyway this poem is great as always 99/5 :P
How innovative! Indeed, this is something to be proud of. I loved how it progress in a way which keeps me reading it through with a rather wonderful, mysterious plot and intensifying atmosphere. 'Twas well-worth my time. Simply a joy to read! Well done, ma'dear! Keep them coming. :) Love, Debbie
OH! The Tagalog poem is about a person getting confused with the stares and glances of another person. While being astounded, she realized the sole 'reason' of this and found herself falling for this individual. It's quite sweet! That's why I decided to post it back in its original language/version. (It wouldn't sound good and would lose its profundity when translated to English.) =) Thanks for the comment, sweetie! Love, Debbie
Ohhhhhh how beautiful!
When I viewed the picture, I was already smiling and thinking 'I'm going to love this, it's about wolves'
And you certainly did the picture justice!
Flawless flow, beautiful imagery and enjoyable word choice and rhyme scheme.
I adore this!
You have a lot of reason to be proud of this piece Gem. Not a lot of ppl can write about animals and still be as poetic as when writing about love. But this is outstanding! I completely loved it! Ahh, the talent! :)