This is an excelent poem i can understand why you would like this one so much it was very well written but i dont think that it should be a dark poem its much more beautiful than a dark poem would be you should put it in a different category such as nature

That's really good, and cool, and other oo words I don't even know. I liked how it come with a picture to look at. Nice.

~*Alex*~

Im sorry about the 'its okay' thing i guess i got a bit jealous cos ur rly rly good.

I would be proud,too ;)
Amazing poem, you almost perfectly described that picture... I enjoyed it very much.

You write very nice! your thoughts are very deep. Great jog!

You write very nice! your thoughts are very deep. Great jog!

Wow, that was so magical! I loved it. The description within it was incredible like the idea of the moon casting spells on their fur and conducting the debut recital. Brilliant :D Thanks for commenting on my work as well, it meant a lot that I was able to cheer you up :) hope everything's ok. You're poem made me feel wonderful so I guess we're even :) xxx

Great poem very well worded and loved it all , especially the last part: he moon conducts this debut recital
As the twinkling stars cast a beautiful sheen
The cubs sing 'til the night comes to an end
The breathtaking song of a small wolverine
Very well done .great job. your friend Tracy5/5

EXCELLENT !! 5/5 !!
SO MYSTICAL AND HAUNTING !!
BEAUTIFUL SIMILIES AND IMAGERIES!!!

Wow what an amazing poem, i didnt need the pic ture becaue you used such amazing imagery. 5/5
keep it up

*btw thank you so much for fixing my spelling =)

To me when I first read the title and then after I read the story, It wasn't what I thought it was going to be like. You should definitly be proud of this piece because it was so outstanding. But so are all of your other poems so please be proud of those too haha. The imagery was so excellent. To me the picture doesn't help the poem because the imagery was so strong you didn't even have to look at the picture. Well done Gem once again
you deserve a 5/5 from me
love always
kaila

That was beutiful, i could never write anything like that, x

OMG! This poem is ACE! I really loved it!
Awesome! ur talented =D

I see why your so proud of it!! Its just absolutely AMAZING!!!

5/5

Stunning Gem. I got chills. Nothing more amazing and mystical than the song of a wolf.

WOW...

YOUR POEM WAS SO AMAZE ME SO MUCH...

I REALLY LOVE IT

You really could picture this as you read it,outstanding use of decriptive words.

Its not what i thought it would be but it was amazing! not many people can write things like this very well done 5/5

Wow i didnt expct the poem to be what it was this was beautifully done def 5/5

What a beautiful poem.
There was a great imagery.
There is not much I can say about this poem further, it's just beautiful.
Take care