Comments : Tryin' To Leave (Part 2)

  • 11 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow i love the way you formatted and the attitude i felt in this poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 11 years ago

    by m4mm07h

    "Now I'm gonna say good bye
    Because, baby, it's your turn to cry."
    Like this part ::P (original was better!!) *no offense plz!!*

  • 11 years ago

    by 888Trinity888

    Hey this is a cool poem with good rhymes!! thanx for the rhymes!! keep writing, xoxo, Trinity