by xPerfect Chaosx May 12, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Words dance on the page |
by Veamm
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Excellent! |
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Amen to that!! ^_^ |
by David
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Oh i do like it very much. the start. oh gee. the way you said it was amazing and so beautiful. this whole poem was amazingly done. |
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Yay! 5/5 for sure!!!!!!! *smiles* |
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Don't agree with the conclusion whatsoever, but on the whole this is a bittersweet piece of excellent prose. If I may make one suggestion: |