My mother

by christina   May 13, 2007


Your hand as gentle
as a rose

Beauty beyond the
midnight sky

With laughter as
Precious

Love that never
ending

Your heart beats
as fast

as a waterfall

as beautiful as one too

you are my mother

and

i love every thing about you

( This was my mothers day poems to my mom that i wrote at school Tell me please how is it?)

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  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    5/5 for the love was beautiful m'dear. Stay sweet.

  • 16 years ago

    by XcrissyX

    Aww this pom is so sweet i love it x

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I thought that it was a great poem. Though it is a little short. It had a great flow and I liked the word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice
    Moms are so important
    and I hope your mom knows how lucky she is
    Very good
    not the most creative
    but you can work on it
    4/5
    love from
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Hey nice poem, i read another one of yours and they are incredibly simular. Any way i enjoyed it. Well done, 4/5 it just seemed like a repitition of your other poem. But still beautiful work.