Comments : If I Vanished Tomorrow...

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I liked this poem very much, it had good flow and great meaning. I liked how you started every stanza with "If I vanished tomorrow" I thought it was perfect. Nice job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Oh wow. This poem is deff. going in my favorite poems category. The depth overall, kept me reading.. I loved it! Great work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Would I remain in your [[hearts]]?
    Don't you mean, heart?
    If this is a one on one thing.
    It's probably just going to be heart.
    It's okay, I guess.
    It seemed kind of forced.
    Although it wasn't the best I've read
    It's also not one of the worst.
    I'm going to have to vote a 4.
    I love your topic, though.
    If you want the vote, PM me.
    I don't know if you'd want someone
    Down voting you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Awe great poem. i loved it and wow ur just talented! keep up the good work! i;d love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them thanks alot!
    Rachel<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    I liked this poem. Its a question I always ask myself and I can totally relate. This was a really good piece of work. 5/5 Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Very Good!
    Great Write
    It flowed really good
    i can relate to this and i think most people can
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Whoo ! Great write (:
    It`s so easy to relate to and captures every corner of the thought of "If I Vanished Tomorrow ..."
    Please insert puncuation tho -.-''
    I felt like the ending was weaker than the rest of the poem, but still a very great write .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    I like the flow sometimes in poems with the same style of rhyme it gets real kiddy but you kept it mature I really liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I liked this 1...great job!..i think all your readers might be able to relate to this 1...the flow was good n it held strong emeotions n dpth..n good write...over all...a 5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    I have thought of these thoughts on such occasions wherein I feel quite blue.

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    This is a great poem! Really enjoyed reading it. Simple to read and still touchy. Ryhme was great. amazing write. Keep up the great work! :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was quite a great poem, I enjoyed reading it and found the words to hold alot of emotion. Deep and strong. An amazingly written poem you have here. Well done on it. A truely interesting read.~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by lala

    I really enjoyed reading that poem. Keep up the good work! ^^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wow! Great flow and rhyme...good questions too. it's full of things I'm sure we all think about from time to time, the big what-ifs!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Chad Picard

    I identify with your choice of topic. This piece addresses it well. Thanks for the read! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Remarkable, I loved the flow, and the word choice was strong. the emtion was deep, and the message was clear. This one I would have to say is my favorite.

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    I dont even know what to say except WOW.
    Amazing Job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5. excellent poem can relate to what you've written. very heart felt. well done. keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    .WOW. ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE GOING THROUGH.