Comments : My future dream home.

  • 10 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Like the poem!! I like the idea of a dream house. I'm glad your not done with the poem, cuze you could make a really cute end to it!! I really want to live in this house!!
    peace

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    What a lovely poem.Sounds like a very nice dream house.well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex

    Aw thanks! It's always been my dream to own a beautiful victorian house.

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    This piece is good n u have described ur dream very well with good selection of words. Keep writing n sure u will b v productive :-)

    With love
    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Nice end!!!
    peace

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex

    Err, well your name is the tasteless so I won't fret.

  • 10 years ago

    by Rach

    I loved this poem, its something people wouldnt normally write about :) its great to read something different then the usual poems and love or depression. keep up the great work :) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sydney

    Ha. Random topic but its pretty good. A bit of randomness can be good at times. It puts a picture in my head.

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow thats a dream home nice poem 5/5 could you read my newest one Black Bear.

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Mm...well...first of all...great idea..i mean perfect topic..sounds like a good idea for a dream...u've painted one thru this work...n i liked it..
    5/5=)
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    Heh. this was a cute poem. haven't read anything like this type before. but i liked the idea of it, the dream house thing. very creative. keep writing. 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You created such a dream..And it is awesome eeven when you think about it
    I especially liked those;

    Sit by the fire
    and enjoy a lovely book
    while your husband walks by
    and gives you a loving look.

    Good job,
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Barbi Taylor

    Dang gurl thats awfully cute! ha ha i liked itvery much, thanx for the comment and keep up the cute stuff
    ~barbi