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by kitkat girl
Like the poem!! I like the idea of a dream house. I'm glad your not done with the poem, cuze you could make a really cute end to it!! I really want to live in this house!!
What a lovely poem.Sounds like a very nice dream house.well done.
Aw thanks! It's always been my dream to own a beautiful victorian house.
This piece is good n u have described ur dream very well with good selection of words. Keep writing n sure u will b v productive :-)
Err, well your name is the tasteless so I won't fret.
I loved this poem, its something people wouldnt normally write about :) its great to read something different then the usual poems and love or depression. keep up the great work :) 5/5
Ha. Random topic but its pretty good. A bit of randomness can be good at times. It puts a picture in my head.
Wow thats a dream home nice poem 5/5 could you read my newest one Black Bear.
by xxSnow Angelxx
Mm...well...first of all...great idea..i mean perfect topic..sounds like a good idea for a dream...u've painted one thru this work...n i liked it..
Heh. this was a cute poem. haven't read anything like this type before. but i liked the idea of it, the dream house thing. very creative. keep writing. 5/5
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by Tricky Daze
You created such a dream..And it is awesome eeven when you think about it
I especially liked those;
Sit by the fire
and enjoy a lovely book
while your husband walks by
and gives you a loving look.
by Barbi Taylor
Dang gurl thats awfully cute! ha ha i liked itvery much, thanx for the comment and keep up the cute stuff