Love the awareness you put out there of true life good job!!!5/5

laura

Aww this poem is so true, good job. I really like the opening line and the poem was perfect. I really like the theme of this poem. Please don't stop writing them ;)

You deserve a 5/5! keep up the good work.

Great job 5/5 keep up teh good work

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Wow ur a fantastic poem writer this poem ROCKS!!!

Excellent poem:)

Your poem is amazing and so very true. It's not the message that makes it great its that it comes from the heart.

Inspiring work...

I liked this poem! great job.
my fav part was:
As we stand in the crowd full of people,
We stop to only notice,
That the world is passing by our very own eyes,
Faster than we would like,

it kinda reminds meh of wut i do...O.O but it was put together nicely and its going in my favs... ^_^
~*~Skye~*~

I enjoyed the message, but. the lack of rhyme in a sense turned me off. overall it was a good poem. rated; 5

And again, you made more of a story than a poem.. =] But you really write them well! =D I think you like to think about life a lot don't you =]? Cause it really comes forward in your poems..
A 5/5 again =]!

Great job.

Its amazing. so true.. you chose words that make you think about what it really means in life.. exellent

Wow.. tht was rele encouragin ... great job

I really like this one. its very interesting.

I really like the topic of this poem its very....whats the word im looking for...insightful of other people i like it alot great job

Very good poem, it's dead on about the world today.. and I like your veiw on it.

This poem is great.
The message is true.
A pleasure to read.
Take care

Very good, I like this one. true and to the point.

Thanks for sharing!

Brilliant poem, real talent in this! Keep it up!

The message sent is engouraging true and basically this is a great meaningful poem.. its amazing. your very intelligent.
just amazingly amazing.
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