Allow me to start by saying welcome back ,great to log on and see that you have posted a write ,and I must say you have not lost you touch ,its done so beautifully.I loved it from start to finish.Good to see you back ,hope you are well ,take care.
Awww, this was very wonderful poetry & the passion in this is just beautiful. Oh, something else too, I don't know if you remember me but I'm Sedusha, and I hope this is bert that I used to talk to. I'm just not sure. =P Hope your well! Well, keep it up & God Bless!
This is something you'll never be without,
Whether you are near or far,
For it is a simple but precious gift...
My love is where you are.
A beautifully ending stanza Bert . The entire poem just makes me want to smile for it's beauty is breath-taking.
Your new name change threw me for a moment ...
Take care dear heart
I adore this piece. It was, in fact, written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic love poem. Regards. =]
Absolutely beautiful....This is honestly what every girl dreams to hear=) I found myself smiling and sighing at the end of the poem...because it is just that darn beautiful!!! great job and you have a gift with words!!!!
This was really sweet and cute. I truely find your love poems to be amazing. The emotion you portrayed is unique. I really did adore reading this piece. Such warmth. Flow, and word choice were spot on. Again I couldn't find a flaw throughout this. Well done~mel