Comments : If I could.

  • 11 years ago

    by June

    Allow me to start by saying welcome back ,great to log on and see that you have posted a write ,and I must say you have not lost you touch ,its done so beautifully.I loved it from start to finish.Good to see you back ,hope you are well ,take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darlene

    Very well written. I enjoyed this piece very much.

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Havent read ur work in ages. great poem. very moving. xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Sparkles

    Awww, this was very wonderful poetry & the passion in this is just beautiful. Oh, something else too, I don't know if you remember me but I'm Sedusha, and I hope this is bert that I used to talk to. I'm just not sure. =P Hope your well! Well, keep it up & God Bless!

    Lovez~ Sedusha~

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    This is something you'll never be without,
    Whether you are near or far,
    For it is a simple but precious gift...
    My love is where you are.
    A beautifully ending stanza Bert . The entire poem just makes me want to smile for it's beauty is breath-taking.

    Wonderful !
    Your new name change threw me for a moment ...
    Take care dear heart

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    I adore this piece. It was, in fact, written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic love poem. Regards. =]

  • 11 years ago

    by Genna

    Great Poem! Keep it up. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Absolutely beautiful....This is honestly what every girl dreams to hear=) I found myself smiling and sighing at the end of the poem...because it is just that darn beautiful!!! great job and you have a gift with words!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Hey Bert,

    lovely sentiments, my friend.

    "I'd give you everything you'd want,
    Or you could ever need,
    But that would never measure,
    All you've given me."

    Just lovely.


  • 11 years ago

    by Jimmysgirl

    This is excellent!!! I love this poem u wrote. U should check out some of mine.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simply Me

    This is beautiful i love it ...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose this poem is soo awesome! just makes me go all smiley and wishes tht someone would say do tht 4 me...a 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Althoough the flow was off a bit in stanza 5, the poem was absolutely beautiful. What a romantic piece for that special someone. Nice job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nee

    Ok,honestly...This is incredibly AMAIZINGGGG!!!!!

    But, I am not a rich man,
    Nor lucky enough to catch a star,
    I can only give you one thing...
    All that's in my heart.

    this stanza absolutely ROCKED!!!!
    I love the poem So much its full of true meanings & love =)...Idk its just so inspiring, your choice of wrods was awesome!

    wonderful work =)
    keep it up
    NemO xx

  • 11 years ago

    by skye16

    One word "beautiful"

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem of love. The emotions you have portrayed in this piece are wonderful.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww that's so sweet and adorable, you really made the poem cute and homey and loveable. great write once again

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was really sweet and cute. I truely find your love poems to be amazing. The emotion you portrayed is unique. I really did adore reading this piece. Such warmth. Flow, and word choice were spot on. Again I couldn't find a flaw throughout this. Well done~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Wow, <3 I have to say this is flawless writing, Wonderful job. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    I really reallyy really loved ur poem n am gona add u to my fav
    keep it up :)