That's so sweet!!

Very nice! Love the choice of words, very creative... I never think to write acrostic poems anymore... probably because i'm no good at them... but this ones very well written and I honestly like it a lot! Keep up the good work! 5/5!! Keep writing and being so creative... i'll be reading more of yours poems! Oh... and good luck with the girl you wrote about! Hope everything works out!

Yo man this is deep, for real! I hope the feeling is mutual! This definitely deserves a 5/5!

Aww madd sweet poem i have 2 give u a 5/5 it was great

That was different but i liked it good job!!!

It was beautiful and touching. i love it. the flow was nice and the poem was beautifully written. great job.

Sad and sweet all at the same time..great poem =)

I love the vocab in this one. Godd word usage is always refreshing. For an acrostic, there was nice flow, which isn't easy to achieve. Although, where you used pulchritude and then beauty in the next line, you pretty much said the same thing lol. Good write.

marcella

This poem is amazing. Wording is superb and atmosphere that you created is unique. You really wrote this piece greatly.
Well done! 5/5

Nice poems.......^_^

Is alvina marsha like her name? sorry i'm a buit stupid. i liked your poems becuse you used a lot of cool words, words that i dont normally see together keep up the good work.

Wow great job!! i love your wordings in here and your imagination.And of course the emotion and the message...

Another good poem but maybe you should tlk to her about your feelings :)
i love these poems
another 5/5

Awww nice poem...i like it...i iwsh someone would write a poem like this for me..*tear*.... and im sorry if she doesnt feel the same as you do.. i know it must hurt..i've been there.

I thought that the language used in this poem was exellent and above adverage. I have just finished an A level in English language and none of the work i have read compares to the beauty of this poem. Brilliant work :D xxx alex xxx

This poem seemed a little strange. The flow was fine, but the choosing of words was rather confusing. 4/5

This had amazing vocab! And the flow was just flawless through out the whole thing, It was truly one of my favorites pieces I've read. This girl is really lucky. 5/5

Again your vocabulary is just stunning and beautiful. Poem after poem I try to use new vocab. but for you it just seems to come so natually. I love it!
5/5
kaila

Lovely piece, i loved it.

How you expressed your emotions was beautiful.

Your word choise was really good.

I liked it.

Very cute! It's sweet to write a poem about someone you care about even if they don't know it. You used just the right words to get the full effect. 5/5 <3