Comments : I Am.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    What a wonderful piece you have penned. Love the imagery.

    I am thunder
    With no sound
    I am lightening
    That never comes around
    I am a storm
    With no power

    Love these lines they are so powerful.
    Awesome write :)
    Love Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    What a brilliant poem, great imagery throughout! i like the final lines, where love is brought into it, i think that works really well.

    Amy x

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Yet another beautiful penned, just simply but very inspirations written.... "For works come from the mind, grow by study and art... But tone leaps from the inner self, revealing the state of the heart."

    Best wishes, Bert.

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    Nitin, its brilliant ,simply mindblowing.Each line has such twist meaning, so dark and yet so real somewhere like spell of black magic lol.Enjoyed it lot.

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Reading this piece induced a sense of refreshing sensation within me. I, in fact, find it rather terrific and paradoxical. =]

    A poetic success, nonetheless. Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care!

    Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    I love this. Just the way you wrote it. Simple, yet very powerful. A truly amazing write. 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nitin......interesting write....like the rhyming and flow...

    I am angel
    Of my own death
    I am master
    Of your creation
    I am sword
    In the name of salvation
    I am tide
    Of your memories
    I am your love
    Release me please

    Love these lines^.....nicely done.....take care, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Perfection! This is REALLY great. I didn't think this style would be really pleasing but wow! I loved it! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Indeed, you are.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lu

    I am master
    Of your creation
    I am sword
    In the name of salvation
    I am tide
    Of your memories
    I am your love
    Release me please
    ^^^
    Amazing lines Nitin ....
    Very unique and I loved the rhyme scheme !
    Well done
    Luanne

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Darkly wonderful my friend 5/5 your friend ben thompson

  • 10 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow fantastic,loved it,you are so talented!!loved the rhyming 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Very nice! oh my god Nitin~ after a long time i logged on this site and read ur poems. they are better. i have stopped writing but guess that all other are still writing. its too gud! lagta hai mujhe fir se shuru karni padegi poetry .......(that same boring one!) hehehe

    anywaz take care
    bye

    luv

  • 10 years ago

    by NIDAL

    Enjoyable read...short simple and powerful...lot of meaning .....keep up the good work 5/5 please vote and comment on "GIFTS OF SORROW" "ARABIAN SANDS" "MY TEARS"

  • 10 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Omg awesome poem!!! 5/5 i love the part with the angel!
    ~*~Skye~*~

  • 10 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow how wonderful your poem is.... i really love it

  • 10 years ago

    by Sugar

    The end was kinda funny

    ur work was great!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    Wonderful flow of writing each word melting into the next well done. xox sam

  • 10 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Another write that leaves one wanting more from you. The flow was amazing.

  • 10 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Wow!!! totally and suberb i really like it!! it was very unique and the meaning were deep!! I really enjoy it even the flow is as soft as velvet. great poem! Keep it up