Darkness

by carla   Jul 2, 2007


I'm alone
Alone in a world of darkness
Alone in a world where you,
You are just another

Why this pain
Why this feeling?
Doctor calls it depression
Mum says it's just me

No one understands this pain
No one knows what I feel
But they are thoughts and feelings
No one will be able to see

Want to be something more
Used to wish for a window
But hey, you're better without one
Stops you aiming too high

You are forced to carry on
To carry on with your life
To carry on with this suffering
To carry on through this endless road

God, please help me
I believe in you
But I have the feeling that,
That you don't love me any more

This is just a funny feeling
Comes from deep inside
It gets you mad, sad and angry
And you don't understand

You just want this to end
You give up and cry
Why can't you end it by yourself?
So you want to commit suicide

And you just sit there, hopeless
Watching your life pass by
Pass by through a road of suffering
Until it ends someday

Please leave coments and rate it =D I want to know what u think =)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    Such a bittersweet poem. The words portray so much which is always vital in a poem so i think you've done a great job!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    This was an amazing poem
    it was filled with a lot of emotion that i could relate too!!
    good job
    5/5
    -- Jess

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. i really lykd it i h8 docs say depression is a state of mind but in my mind i wish not 2 feel that way it's just the way i am. i could really relate 2 this. loved it! 5/5

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