Weathering Emotions

Unique... Sherry, you always amaze me with your writes and this one amazed me tons... I love the way you incorporated weather with lostlove and it came out brilliantly....

An ice storm hit today
Turned your heart cold
Unable to feel the warmth
From the love I thought we shared

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Wow start.... The metaphors create the perfect atmosphere and how misunderstanding broke the relation that your love turned ignorant of the beautiful past you both shared...

Fog came rolling in
Clouding up my mind
Leaving me confused
Wondering what took place earlier today

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You were wonderous of the happening and confused hence and the metaphors just depicted it right.

Hurricane Paul followed close by
Just when I thought it was safe
He blew everything apart
Including my heart

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I love the mention of hurricane paul here and how you thought that all will turn normal but it turned ugly later to affect you emotionally and made you disheartened eventually.

Tornados touched down
Much bigger than any F5
It is officially proclaimed
I now suffer from heartache

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The initial 2 lines speak more like a news but the latter 2 made me think.over the initial ones as the meaning then changed to a metaphor... It shows how you state officially declared your heart break to all.

The weather man made a mistake
He called for sunshine today
Instead the rain continues to fall
Right from my eyes drop by drop

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What an end...!!! Your love then called for love again when you are still in the phase of lostlove and upset...

I loved this badly and I am grateful to have read this... Keep writing Sherry... You have masterpieces to share...
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Wonderful heartfelt write, I fully enjoyed reading this poem. I loved your choice of words, everything was flawless except for puncuation, I didn't see any puncuation anywhere. The flow and structre were both good as well. Overall a great write, keep it up!

Peace, Joe

Wow-I can feel the mist of those falling tears and think your free verse is great. I love it. Your emotions really shine here and the feelings that propel them selves into the reader are overwhelming. Thanks

Wow, such a poem. wonderful choice of words i loved your poem indeed and how expressed your feelings out there

no wonder you have the popularity

:-( I CAN RELATE! 5/5 Beautiful explanation. Even if one hasn't felt that way, they can understand