Comments : Fallen Soldiers (Acrostic)

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Such sad beautiful heartfelt words.... it's a shame what these soldiers and their families are faced with day in and day out.

  • 16 years ago

    by JaM

    This is a sad and touching poem although it does reach the heart. You did a great job on this. (better than I could've lol) perhaps I'll teach myself from you hehe

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent write and very touching...

    so beautifully you have described the life of a soldier.. how they have to face death at every step... their call of duty...

    "Loving friendships commended
    Death constantly knocking at their door
    Innocents loss with each gun shot
    Everything changes; there heart and soul"

    ^^ this is really wonderfull... my heart goes out to all those soldiers fighting for their country...

    you have done a splendid job...
    loved it..