A love So Strong

by Tiffany   Sep 10, 2007


She said look at me
he looked away, she handed him a note...
he glanced at her, and saw the tears,
as he grabbed the piece of paper.
She got up and walked away.
He goes home.

Later that night he's laying in bed,
Decides to read what she offered,
"you don't want to be with me. I'm not as great as you think."
Continuing to read her words, he begins to cry,
' what is she saying? ' he thinks.
Then he skims to the bottom and reads the saddest words.
" i decided to leave u, and leave life.
I know you thought the world of me but there were things you didn't know"

He then broke down, he couldn't take losing her.
He screams into his pillow, tears falling down, as he grabs the knife.
1 cut, 2 cuts... he begins to lose count.
His mom is pounding on the door
"son! whats wrong?"
"go away mother!" he cries back.
She bursts in, and stops,
"son, what is wrong?"
"its my love" he says."she's gone"
she sits on the bed, looks at his wrists,

"son, she didn't kill herself because she felt neglectful"
She rubs his tears," she killed herself because she had cancer,
and was scared to tell u"

his eyes get big, he stares at her picture,
"but mom, i knew all along, her mother told me,
It made my love for her stronger."

Just then, the radio comes on, and the couples song begins playing.
He looks to the sky " baby, I love you, you will always be my only angel!"
Then he lays down, and cuts his wrist one more time,
"here i come angel, see you when i get there"

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  • 16 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Loving the story line very sad and motional but that gives it the edge 5/5

    return the favour

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow kinda like a story but i had a great visual in my head and this poem kept me reading 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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