Comments : THE DREAM AND REALITY OF YOU AND I (A Surreal Love Poem)

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely penned sir, within beautiful emotions you write this poem to her, "this can't describe within word, but from your heart...." one of beautiful love poems... Perfect!

  • 10 years ago

    by Wake

    A silent wow is what my mouth let out..u knw,,tht cold one tht sends tht chill dwn yir spine..brrrrr .. Awesome piece this .. simply.

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    This is excellently penned. It was so fluid from start to finish, with a great musical rhythm. Beautiful vocabulary, and very emotive and heartfelt. I adore this writing.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A beautiful poem, but then...everything you write is just that: beautiful!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Ohhhh my goshhh Gary, i can't believe i haven't read this one before!!!!! its absolutly amazing! its feel like you just thrusted me into nirvana reading that! love these kinds of poems, beautiful gary, just beautiful.

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Gary, Bravo, an Incredible Spill of Love, Magnificent!!!