Comments : I just can't.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    This is a pretty good poem. first off you need to put some spaces in there so its easier to read. plus it makes it look better. um i can feel the emotion there is alot of it and i can def. feel it in there. um keep up ur writing. its pretty good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cuttie

    You are right. you know when you write it's easy for you to read, but definately you are right, it is hard sometimes. I will take a look and make some changes.

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This is a really good poem...
    a lot of emotion and so much sadness...
    loved it =)
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    I do really like this poem for it makes u feel real emotion. Keep on Cuttie

  • 16 years ago

    by Brian Yazzie

    Keep on doing what your doing..i liked the poem

  • I really like this
    i can feel the emotion in it!
    nice work hunni
    keep it up
    xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by XxSINISTERxX

    I LOVE THIS POEM BUT IT MAKES ME FEEL SAD CUZ THIS IS HAPPENIN TO ME RIGHT NOW