This is cute

Wow that is such a great poem. keep up the great work!!! I really loved it!

This poem left me speech lesssss so all im gonna sai is WOW

This one won for a reason!!!!
Love it !

I like how the poem is imagine...it's like you could feel all the things written and wish that they were true...

I LOVE IT!!!

I like it lol but I bet you have heard that a lot! 5 out of 5

Hey cute poem...

Wow

Wwow

Oh boy how I would wish everyday was like in the fairytales;-)

"Keep a tight hold of your dear teddy bear"
[Keep a tight hold on your dear teddy bear]
- 'On' makes more sense to me than 'of'.

I have to say this poem made me tired. But in a good way. It was the sleepy kind of thing you tell your 4 year old girl so she'll fall asleep, which I adore about it. I love innocence in poetry and you definitely pulled that off, plus everything it could possibly need.

"Keep a tight hold of your dear teddy bear"
^^ i adore adore adore this line! gosh its was so cute : ) it made me think of a little kid being like no its mine! so cute it is something i would so still say at this age

"Chocolate drops fall from a Vanilla sky"
^sounds so yummy! with a great mental image incorporated i love how you used the opposites
Chocolate and vanilla
it was just giving this line an extra kick ; )

"
Pink candy floss cloads float lazily past
Time in this dreamworld flies by way too fast
A cute little elf reaches for your hand
Ring around the roses then fall on the sand"
^^ i think you spelled clouds wrong in the first line? i would be wrong maybe its a word idk : x but this was BY FAR my favorite stanza ((discluding the last one i mean come on the last stanza just was perfect unreal even! )) I thought it had such an innocent fun vibe to it like just enjoy life!!!

I loved this poem! i can see why there are so many comments! it was phenomenal ! : ) I wouldn't change a single word or arrangement! it was breathtaking literally! it took me to a care free smiley happy place which let me tell you, is so hard to find now a days so many people are upset and depressed they miss all the simple intricate miracles and majestic things here from butterfly kisses to carousels : )
Perfect job. 5/5 : )

A little to sweet for what I usually write(& read),but having a young child I see that there is some necessity for trifles & cuteness, this in a way inspires me to try my hand at writing verse that is cute and sweet.

Wow i like this

I like this

This is really lovely and adorable!!! I enjoyed every line!! Good job for this!!! God bless you!!!

Its very good I like it

Nice poem about life...amazing..good job

My God that was beautiful, i would to read this to my child one day as a bed time story. :) great job!