Well, I'm not really going to say anything about this piece since I'm sure you've heard/read it all before, but I will say that I enjoyed reading it. But just incase you want to hear it some more, flow, structure, words, rhymes, story, imagery, it's all good, lol.

Brad

Pretty good. ;)

WOOOOW amaziiing am in love with it. great great work its so magical.

Thats amazing, it has to be the best poem I think I have ever read! Great job

Refreshing. Love it!

This poem is amazing ... you made me go back in time when i uses to to read fairytails ....
keep up the good work

Zvetty

Very Creative...

This was so magical and easy to get lost in!
I loved it! ~5/5

Great colorful words love vit

Very cute poem. 5/5
-oNice

That was the best poem i have ever read :) *favs*

This is one of the best poems I've read,
seems like you brought me in that moment
when we were young. :)

I loved it .. sort of like the utopia we all have when we are small children..and all those little foolish things we believe in and our parents play along to.. x

Your poem is so cute!:]

Omggg i absolutley love itt its soo cute and it made me happy lol

This poem really makes me think of going back to a time where it wasnt so complicated and imagining that everything was okay...

I dont have words to praise it.........

Wow this such a good poem.=)

Aww that is cute

Aww that is cute