The one you love, or the one who loves you?

by Cheyenne   Nov 24, 2007


My heart has been riped out, torn into pieces and thrown on the ground.
& i never once thought my heart could again be found.

but, you have done something that's allowed my heart to heal.
just something i wish you would understand how i feel.

every little thing about you is perfect to me.
i just wish, one day, maybe we could be.

however, for a few simple reasons we never could.
& by me, those reasons are sometimes misunderstood.

i feel like sometimes you don't know what to do.
choose the one you love or the one who loves you.

& it feels like this is a lost cause, like I'm hurting myself over nothing.
but, i refuse to give up on you, because to me your everything.

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  • 16 years ago

    by natyy

    I really like itt!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Choose the one you love or the one who loves you.

    interesting line. I enjoyed it. My only suggestion with your work is to count the syllables, nobody says they have to be spot on, but it helps if it flows a little better. but like I said your message is totally good and rhyme is good too!
    *ME*