Star-crossed Lovers

by Katie   Jan 1, 2008


You and I, we are one
But our bodies make us two
Forever dancing in the midnight sun
Following each other's cue

I ,chasing your vibrant tail
You, chasing mine that is so bleak
What is it that we both seek
No matter for we shall not fail

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Wow, love it! especially how you changed styles for both stanzas 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This is another beautiful poem Katie. It's captivating. I loved the first stanza.

    You and I, we are one
    But our bodies make us two
    Forever dancing in the midnight sun
    Following each other's cue

    This was so full of imagery. I loved how you pulled this piece off. Give yourself a pat on the back because you have proved that you are very talented. Keep up the great work.

    Letty

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