Lackadaisical

by silvershoes   Jan 12, 2008


Lazy days come again
Inside my rose garden

There is a pixie
Latent by her wishing well
She sings
A tune that lightens my step

Familiarity
In saturated breaths

Her spirit flickers, but dream-like
I fall under a spell
By languid moods that
Idle for too long
Foot falls languorous

And when I awaken from
Her indolent lullaby

I am reprieved

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Another piece that I really loved..thought provoking and not really clear.
    I loved the wording so much, and how I am able to take the meaning which suits me, even if it wasn't the one you're aiming at.

    the opening 2 lines are really interesting and I loved the way u ended it

    I am reprieved
    ^^
    amazing!

    but the 2nd part and 3rd would sound better if u organize the fullstops and commas

    other than that

    5/5

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