Song Poem Contest :) :)

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    Okay so pick a tittle (two per person limit) and write a poem with that tittle. You must have one line from that actual song in the poem and when you submit it just underline the line. :) Have fun!

    Chances - Five For Fighting ()
    Best I Am - Flaw ()
    Live A Lie - Default (Lady Nik)
    Carry Me - Dead By April (yakari gabriel)
    Already Gone - Crossfade (morgan)
    Unspoken - Brightwood ()
    Best Of You - Foo Fighters ()
    Rose In December - Halestorm ()
    From The Heart - Hoobastank (Inside The Liar)
    Collide - Howie Day (Courageous Dreamer)
    You Cant Break A Broken Heart - Kate Voegele ()
    The Special Two - Missy Higgins (dollwithafrown)
    This Is Home - Switchfoot (Spirit)
    Cut - Plumb ()
    Happy - Saving Jane ()
    Breakeven - The Script (All Angel No Wings)
    Angels On The Moon - Thriving Ivory (LifesALovePoem)

    Deadline is December 27th at 11:00pm.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    14 years ago

    Collide - Howie Day please.

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    This Is Home - Switchfoot PRETTY PLEASE

    oh do we have to use the same metor and rhyme scheme?

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    Nope you can do whatever you want. It doesn't have to be the same as the song. Good luck! :)

  • Krista
    14 years ago

    Angels on the Moon, please.

    :)

  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    Live A Lie - Default

    Please and thank you

  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    Live A Lie

    The things I've seen are enough
    to make me yank these eyes
    from head and socket
    and cover them with thick
    layers of blindness. Just enough
    to make the whispers
    I write down scream out loud.

    But I'd never tell a soul

    Who would listen?

    I can hear the words
    of those that still despise me
    playing a little ditty in
    the cracks of my
    brain. HA! I broke
    the mold, beat the system
    I'm the psycho and you
    can't contain me.

    Does it make you puke?
    It should.

    I win, always will, always have.
    I'm full of it,
    whatever it may be.
    Not sure actually.
    I just know I'm overflowing
    with toxic waste
    paste a label on my forehead
    for the world to see
    "Warning" is all it should say.
    Get too close and you'll see why.

    SNAP!!!!!!

    I'm sorry if I'm speaking too loud
    I want to make sure
    everyone hears me. Not just
    you but the people you
    can't see or don't
    want to admit are real.

    I can see them...hear them too.

    (My observation is complete, she's lost it)

    No..No I haven't. I put
    it in a bottle and let it fall
    over the side of the earth.
    If you can catch it
    you'd find a little piece of me.
    I'm just as normal as the
    rest. This is the lie I will
    always live.

    (Take her back to isolation please nurse)

    "I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me..."

    *The line I used was "words
    of those that still despise me" *

  • Krista
    14 years ago

    Line I used was "Tell me all your thoughts about the stars that fill the moon lit skies."

    Angels on the Moon

    Tell me all your thoughts about the
    stars that fill the moon lit skies,
    dreams of an happy ever after.
    Goals unaccomplished, I lay here,
    wondering what will spark in ending.
    Final breaths slowly rattle my bones,
    shakily released by an unwilling mind.

    I believe in those distant angels on the moon. Do you?

    Crisp white sheets wrap my body,
    broken down by years of worry.
    Who ever knew I'd end up here,
    after lengthy promises of "I'll be fine,
    don't worry about me." Silent pleadings.
    My eyes take one last look around
    before closing one final time.

    I believe in a life after death, that it's all true. Do you?

    Moniters show my slowing heart beat,
    lines, once rigid, calm into a flat line.
    A silent prayer, the cry of alarms.
    My eyes wander over the scene.
    Bodies moving quickly over mine,
    feeble attempts to revive my soul.
    I turn away, walking into the clouds.

    I wasn't afraid of dying; leaving everything behind. Are you?

  • Inside the Liar
    14 years ago

    I'll take "Already Gone" by Crossfade.

  • dollwithafrown
    14 years ago

    "The Special Two", please. :) Awesome songs, by the way. I'm a huge fan of Missy Higgins and Kate Voegele especially. :D

  • dollwithafrown
    14 years ago

    The Special Two
    by dollwithafrown

    Your hands still feel the same,
    Like the first time I met you:
    Cold and small and delicate;
    Little boy in a big man's shoes.
    Even in the summertime,
    When the sun would burn your back;
    I'd tease that you had dead hands;
    You'd moan: "Cut me some slack!"

    --

    Oh I wonder now if you wondered then,
    How life would change once the clock struck ten,
    And after darkness you never looked back;
    Bare on the concrete; a painting of blue and black.

    Telling me it was "hate crime", I wonder how that could be;
    I'd never met a single soul who could hate the man I see.
    Were they jealous of your smile? The one that called my name.
    They were only jealous as you were not the same.

    They said you were a "faggot";
    Said you shouldn't be allowed to live.
    I'm trying to understand, but all I see
    Is the kind of love they could never give.

    --

    Your hands still feel the same,
    But now they're painted black and blue.
    I'm really trying to understand,
    But this is now proving too hard to do.
    I kiss you on your forehead,
    Wave goodbye one last time to you,
    Knowing I'll never get this love back,
    ['Cause we were the special two.]

    The line from the actual lyrics is in brackets, right at the end of my poem. :)

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    By Spirit

    It's quiet, much too quiet
    I almost feel alone
    It's weird how I can say that
    while knowing, "This is Home."

    No little hands reach out
    No feet run cross the floor
    No tiny pleading voices
    begging, "Just once more."

    With the house no longer sticky,
    and everything whiped clean
    it almost feels deserted
    "Do you know that I mean?"

    When there's nothing left to trip on
    'cause's all been put away
    The house is rather empty
    I don't know what else to say

    How can I explain to you
    T'someone who'd never see
    Just how much I need my kids
    and how much they need me

    I'm not going to preach to you
    That all kids are perfect or smart,
    but each one of my children
    holds a big piece of my heart

    I could go on forever,
    but until my kids are grown
    I gladly fight off nightmares
    in this place I call, "My Home."

    *A dedication to all parents

  • morgan
    14 years ago

    Can I have already gone please

  • Inside the Liar
    14 years ago

    I'd like to change mine to "From the Heart" by Hoobastank please.

  • Second to None
    14 years ago

    Break Even by The Script please :)

  • Second to None
    14 years ago

    Breakeven

    Its scarey how the one you love can hurt you so bad
    You were so attached but he moved on like you were a fad
    Now your unexpectedly stuck trying to pull yourslef together
    You thought you were were stuck like glue for now and forever

    He already has a new girl who's fingers are interlocked in his hand
    Now that he's gone your stuck in what seems like another land
    Think back to when he broke you poor heart
    He was so selfish he helped himself to the biggest part

    Its 4 a.m. and your still struggling to get to sleep
    Giving up hope you've already counted 1000 sheep
    He was your lover and your very best friend
    Its funny how people who say their there for life still leave in the end

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    Sorry everyone that I'm a day late but I was dragged into a rather tedious day of party planning and preparation. Okay so I loved everyone's poems but sadly I must choose.... so...
    1st dollwithafrown - The Special Two
    2nd Spirit - This Is Home
    3rd All Angel No Wings - Breakeven

    So thanks everyone for participating and congrats to the winners :)

  • dollwithafrown
    14 years ago

    Gahh, thank you so much for placing me first. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. :) And congrats to the other winners!