Emotions Contest

You pick one emotion and try to make that reader feel the emotion. It can be about anything just it has to go with that emotion. only 2 people per emotion. One enter per person. Have fun yall. Can wait to read what you write.

Rules:

1. must be at least 14 lines long
2. Needs to have at least 1 simile
3. Have fun with this.

Winner:

1st 4 Comments
2nd 3 Comment
3rd 2 Comment

Deadline:
Sept. 16, 2011

Happy:
1.Roses and lilys
2.
Sad:
1.
2.
Worried:
1.dollwithafrown
2.
Anger:
1. Larry Chamberlin The Godfather
2.
In Love:
1.Hold Your Heart
2. The Poetess
Envy:
1.
2.
Fear:
1.Lebanese Phoenix
2.
Pride:
1.SpiritRising
2.

I will reserve
IN LOVE
please.

Thank you and hope many entries

Fear, please :)

Eyes closed unto you.
.

I will be everlasting
in your eloquence of kisses-
how we reminisce
love's un-denying wind
through embraces heights can't climb.

That summer, the world was impassive,
while we explored courageous
cities, and gave everything
for that moon of trust.

Winter comes back,
yet I am only welcomed
by your sacrifice of return
and the warmth you breathe.....
articulating
a single note of emotion
that flutters, opens
into a light like
no other promise.

Can you tell our angels
to bring us closer?
Impossible.

And like precious days
we'll keep blossoming,
never a moment
where we will stray
from that first passion,
where I learned
the vow of our destiny.

Don't open your eyes-
for our beauty cannot be seen
as bright as we wish,
but it will shine more
in our souls the more we keep
caressing what we believe in;
see that I am loving you
deeper than time itself.

Happy, please

Happy

The sun is shining today so brightly,
no cloud could stand a chance.
The rays of light shine on my bare skin
through gaps in the branches above me
like a blanket warming and comforting.

As I lay here relaxing and
breathing in the sweetly scented air.
While bird trill unseen in the trees,
sprinkles of water escape one lonely cloud
cooling my flesh, it couldn't feel better.
I can't remove this smile from my lips.

How could this day get any better?
Happiness is the only emotion I'm feeling right now.
Surrounded by nature during its gentlest of times
thinking of nothing but the beauty around me.
As I watch the water of a stream wash over round rocks,
tadpoles and little fish dart around, silver and brown blurs.

A butterfly flutters to me alighting upon my hand,
keeping me company for a good ten minutes
tickling my skin with its tine little feet,
I couldn't help but laugh out loud.

Laughter shook my body scaring my little friend away
Now it won't stop, it has taken me over.
If someone walked by they would think I am crazy.
Nothing could put a damper on this day
not even a sudden down poor could bring me down.

I'm feeling lighter then I have in a long time
no dark thoughts cross my mind
as I start sing a song out loud
making it up as I go, happiness
Hmm, I have never felt it like this before.

By: Brittany

In Love, please! XD

-Melody-

If only you were
a melody...

I would linger upon
my piano
composing your
existence
at every midnight.

I would daydream
of the same
banal love while
singing you.

I would age on
a balcony that sojourns
away from my dusky god
or my dusty shelf,

so that I'd oftentimes
head for you,
dropping in

(without even
questioning myself.)

By : Noura Hatem.

Fearless Air

I'm used to convince myself
that the life I possess is
of disparate air.

But recently,
I have grown weary of
pretending that I'm not
dwelling in despair and that
routine is not the puppeteer
of my days.

In fact, all what I've
been doing is ripping years
off my gray calendar
and listening to desperate
fortunetellers trying to
foresee a future traced
by black patterns in an
empty cup of Arabian coffee.

How sick it is -

always returning
to my dull skyscraper,
where stacks of office paper
await me,
and harlot thongs
make out with used condoms
underneath loathsome couches.

I'm sick of such sickness -

growing hopeless
while praying
to a hammered God,
that I don't believe in,
upon a soulless wooden cross,
pretending that He's the mere
path leading to heaven.
(Does that even exist?)

I'm really tired of thinking -

And I no longer will lie to myself
and say that I enjoy
Shakespeare's boring sonnets
or Coelho's gay novels.

I really need, for once,
to swallow my pride
and confront the social fear
that's inhibiting me.
--

I want to
drive my convertible naked
and stalk little children.

I want to eat
KFC and
sundae-dipped fries
till I fart and burp and vomit
without saying sorry.

I want to yell at my boss
and make love in public.

There's no one that will stop me!

I'll pick my nose like I'm
4 years old again
and bungee-jump from
my office.

And I'll turn off my
phone and mingle with
total strangers.

Who knows?
I might even get enrolled in
ballet classes!

...

I just want to be free -
Don't you dare stop me!

~ Abed.

Anger, please

Worried, please.

Untraceable (worried)
by dollwithafrown

The clock on the mantelpiece stopped
keeping a steady time
the minute they showed up at the door.
It was like the rain and the lightening
had fused together
to burn my soul to ashes.

I tried to count your footsteps
from the puddles that lined
the front path,
but puddles dry with ease
at the first glimmer of warmth,
and your footsteps
never were very traceable.

Your room, so flamboyant,
the sharp pink always did hurt
my eyes, but goodness would I kiss it
and embrace it,
just to see you in the background once again.

As a baby, you were a creature from
another world.
The smell of your skin and those
fine hairs that were touching on invisible
gave me the kind of comfort I did
not know was embraceable; ceasing
to exist.

(for the first time in my life,
I knew perfection had been attained.)

My bitten nails, swollen lips
like battered jelly
bring no consolation.
The clock stays still, my eyelids halt,
not wanting to blink in case one second
is missed.

We fit together, like a cauldron to
the cackle of a witch.
Please my darling,
find your way home.

My Doomed Interloper

What the devil makes you think
that I would ever let you
interfere with my life or my love
without retribution divinely called.

The skies themselves may open,
torrents drag the very ground
from beneath my feet, yet still
you will feel the fury of my fists.

As a bear smashes thick trees
to splinters, you shall be smote
and find that your own god
has forsaken you for ever more.

Where I inter you will bear no green:
salt I will sow and like Carthage
nothing again will come from your life
as well you never were born.

When is the deadline?

The deadline was the 16th unless it's been extended

When do we find out who won or has it been extended?

Two sides of a strange story

Is it a strange to say
Ive two sides in one story
a story you dont even know
something Ive kept inside
its more a fight within me
a fight between right and wrong
and its so wrong to say
that Ive never cared
cause it would be a lie
still I see how much you try
to show me how much better
you are now without me
pushing me away like
Ive never meant something
but isnt it right for me to say
that all I ever wanted
was for you to be happy
to have everything
well in this side of the story
its clearly to see that
you are the one I love the most
but in the other side of the story
makes me hate you so much
for pushing me away like Im nothing
every time when you look at me
I see your smile fading
saying that you regret you ever knew me
that you dont love me at all
well the first side of my fight
wont ever fade away
but I really hope you could
vanish the second side of my fight
cause I really dont wanna hate you ..

Sorry yall. I got so busy with school and things. I'll judge them tonight and have winners up tonight or towmmrow morning.

1st- Larry Chamberlin the godfather
2nd- The Poetess
3rd- Lebanese Phoenix

Good job to everyone that entered. Sorry I didn't judge sooner. To the winners I will have comments done by Oct.11.
Thank you.

Thanks :)

THANKS :)

Thank you!
Apparently Abby's contest has been a distraction. I appreciate your efforts in running this contest.

I dont know when the dead line is or anything

It"s closed sorry