Collab Contest - Poems (Voting time!)

  • hiraeth
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Hi guys, sorry for the delay was waiting on a couple of entries, and life got in the way. Here are the poems. Please read them, and vote on the poems! Send me a pm with your 1st place poem, 2nd place poem, and 3rd place poem. I'll tally up the votes and post the results. :)

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    Title: “Releasing You”
    Poets: “deeplydesturbed and mossgirl19”
    Prompt: Wordset (phone, calendar, notes, rain, moon, flower)
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    My phone sounded off full volume
    And I had chills thinking of an emergency
    In my haste, I broke the little bottle of perfume
    The only remembrance of you with me.

    As the glass shattered on the floor
    Tears fell from my eyes
    as heavy as rain on an open moor
    yet when I looked at the phone I was met with surprise.

    The screen said it was but a birthday alarm
    Looking at the calendar, I remembered
    Maybe to greet you will do me no harm
    But my little proud, injured self-dissented.

    As the scent of the perfume reached my nose
    The heavenly scent of that one flower
    My mind went where it always goes
    Realising just how much I’d put you in a tower.

    I thought I’d diligently erased all the notes
    Of you and the sweet love we used to share
    Seems I left some memories to stay in my boat
    While all the while I pretended not to care.

    Today is the night of the new moon
    So maybe it’s time I finally release my mind
    I’m glad I spilled the last of your perfume
    As now all our strings no longer bind.

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    Title: “The Sea Foams at Night”
    Poets: “BlueJay and Aries Rising”
    Prompt: Title + wordset
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    I sit at my desk watching the flame of that tiny candle dance.

    It flickers and leaps, caught in the draft as the ocean breeze forces its way
    past the window frames of this old, rickety shack.

    I know that same breeze causes the water to churn,
    white horses surging towards the shore.

    Although I cannot see it, I know it tumbles rocks and stones
    as the stream will tumble autumn winds will drop apples
    along its course to meet the sea - somewhere else

    where the television doesn't stay on all night and
    cinnamon is always wafting through the air.
    Somewhere filled with tranquility, unlike this riot
    that's raging day after day within this chest of mine.

    The sea foams at night and sometimes that's all we need
    to save ourselves from the apricot colored hues of
    rustic mistakes that almost were,

    but never made their way to the sea.

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    Title: “Honesty isn’t something I know”
    Poets: “Em and Micheal”
    Prompt: Title + wordset
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    Like being caught out in the rain
    I was soaked; in pitiless shame
    the day you knew my callous game
    drenching your heart in pain

    I brought you a bouquet of lies,
    petals wept; from your wilted eyes.
    The sweet; sensual scent of us; dies
    leaving roots; rotten of demise

    The Chardonnay nights that we fought,
    my feelings; drowned in distraught.
    The flowers; felt fake that you bought,
    my love; not even in your thought.

    The boat; we built with trust, set sail
    our hearts; drifted; destined to fail.
    A tenderness once; now became stale
    the moon; blanched blessings, to no avail.

    What a fool; I was, sd let you go
    my true colours blossom; now all on show.
    Back to a life of more lies; my status quo
    Sadly. Honesty isn’t something I know!

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    Title: “The Wind Whispers Only At Three AM”
    Poets: “Brenda and Larry”
    Prompt: Title
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    The older I get,
    the more sleep eludes me.
    I often find myself
    curled up in my chair,
    gazing out on our moonlit garden,
    while the wind whispers its secrets...
    I think of you also-
    it's been nigh forty years
    since I last saw your face.
    Another summer, another lifetime ago.
    Always wondering,
    do you ever think of me?
    _
    It's too early in the morning again;
    lately my soul has drawn me back
    to lusty college days loving that girl
    on dusty roads in a topless Firebird:
    rustic orchards, green alfalfa fields
    trees shivering in red and yellow
    like overgrown burning bushes,
    with sweet apricot brandy on ice
    sipped on a hidden gazebo with Her.
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    No-one could hold
    a candle to you...
    You were like a Sun God;
    shimmering in the heat.
    The last vestige of summer.
    Late nights spent on the phone
    when were apart.
    Cryptic notes scribbled
    on my calendar,
    our own language of love...
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    Wonder what would happen
    if she were to wander alone
    into our library and walk over
    to our carrel - would she smile
    to find me sitting there - waiting?
    But our paths have diverged
    each gone to careers, though
    my own has become a single file
    trudging through the public jungle.
    But, it'd not be fair to try to tear her
    from the safety and comfort
    that she has for her sanctuary.
    Still...the dream whispers to me,
    borne nightly on the wind at 3 AM.

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    Title: “Nightingale”
    Poets: “Darren and Maple Tree”
    Prompt: Title
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    Snow in Autumn falling,
    yet hanging on to fresh air
    gliding then tumbling, spinning
    like the moon shedding a dusty layer

    Rustic leaves land upon the earth
    slowly dying, whispering
    final moments of life
    as winter's calling arrives.

    I spy the nightingale
    eye burning like a candle
    beckoning me from my shattered daydream
    snow crunching staggering, I approach tentatively.

    Cautiously optimistic,
    I seek conversation of melody
    however I fall deaf to song
    and other peaceful endevers.

    I expected rain, not this biting cold
    flowers hidden, their bloomage carpeted
    that bird still watching me
    a blot on a blank canvas landscape.

    Wishing for color to explode
    like confetti during a thunderstorm,
    my mood shifts, cheeks blushing,
    he heard my mind before I spoke.

    I lay on my back, this ice blanket distorting
    'Mr Nightingale, you have freedom'
    'this whole world to explore.'
    drifting away while making snow Angels, pretending to fly.

    "You are but a fool to think that seasons bind you,
    for within each precious moment, you are given
    a light to guide your apricot eyes; you are a fruitfull spirit"
    now fly my child, he whispers,

    and flys away, under the dark, sultry moon.

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    Title: “Untitled”
    Poets: “Poetess and hiraeth”
    Prompt: Yann Tiersen’s “Mother’s Journey
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    we knead our laments into
    something palpable into the
    early hours of mourning,
    growing conscious of the
    fact that summer winds
    don’t bring enough
    warmth for cold homes.

    there is no respite to be felt
    after murmured prayers
    before an altar cluttered
    with burned out candles and
    nostalgic memories.

    the atmosphere blossoms
    into something tangible,
    something bittersweet
    on the tip of our tongues;
    we chew on your memories
    eschewing momentarily
    from the real reason
    we've gathered here today.

  • BlueJay
    6 years ago

    How is this going? Because I know I'm still having a difficult time deciding how to vote!

  • Michael replied to BlueJay
    6 years ago

    Yes not easy bluejay at all. But I have managed to make the decisions haha

    Michael :)

  • Larry Chamberlin
    6 years ago

    Wow!

  • hiraeth
    6 years ago

    Still at a tie, if you haven't voted please do so!

  • deeplydesturbed
    6 years ago

    Cmon guys haha !! We know theyre good but vote vote vote!!

  • CJ Maleney
    6 years ago

    Done mine and no it wasn't easy

    Craig