I agree with senyru, your use of the prompts are great, and also to have this good a flow in an acrostic poem is very hard, and you have done it brilliantly. I am very impressed. The lines connect together very well and I didn't find myself stumbling at each new line like I can sometimes do in acrostics.

The beginning of the poems has such a deep impact at first read, to feel so depressed and broken, that even death does not scare you, or worry you. It often seems better than life.

I like the question you used in the first line of the second stanza, it was well placed and fits in well.

I like the really dark tone through out - but especially the ending, where you mention that nothing will clean away this darkness from within.

Very good job.