Alone with a face of no glee

^ That should probably be without glee instead of "of no glee" simply because as it is it is distracting the reader from the wonderful flow you had already created.

I like how short the piece is and yet is still deep enough that you are sharing a part of yourself with us (the audience). Actually this is one of my favorites from you, but I think it would fit a little better in the sad category, not really dark or fantasy.

Anyway, nice job

Sorry multiple posts

. . . sorry

Evil school computers.