Comments : Stockholm Syndrome

  • 8 years ago

    by WW

    Wow! Thought provoking, moving piece. Each line has its own way of hitting, and that pattern escalates until the last line! Fantastic.

    Your last line is a hot spot, but I feel like it is a bit lost. perhaps "like one more abortion" or "like one of your abortions"

    otherwise wouldn't change a thing! Thanks for sharing, added to favorites.