Comments : Death Dancer

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Great poem!

    Gave me goosbumps! I like the setting, imagery and how you ended it! Wonderful work!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Andrea. The descriptive writing in this is wonderful - truly. As below, it gives you goose bumps reading.
    "whispering cemetery" - that's wonderful: the idea of the dead creating a whispering graveyard.
    "Midnight calls upon a sheltered shadows (shadow's?) misery"

    ^^^

    The alliteration is sublime and the whole line rolls off the tongue wonderfully.

    Great piece, Andrea - you imagination knows no bounds!

    All the best,
    Ben