A dark and hectic write from you that left me gasping for breath, lol.

Great stuff and welcome to the site,

Ben

Hello,

I thought this was very good. I agree with Ben, it was wonderfully dark and hectic. Each 'Knock knock' felt more intense than the last.

One suggestion, though - or maybe even just food for thought - what if it's not a dream?

Regards,

Bradley

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