Very nice poem! You did an awesome job with your word use. I personally am not a fan of a non rhyming poem, but you did a fine job on this one. God Bless 5/5
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I like this one also especialy the line
dead as always
dead on the inside

good work.

I interpreted this as being about death. If so it was a rather interesting depiction of your final moments. I liked your first line. Not really a contradiction but there was contrast (not sure if thats the best word). Silence doesn't typically break peace so it catches the readers attention early on.

Another great read! Awesome!!!
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Wow, another one. Breath- taking poem. Wording is superb and you really now how to make majestic atmosphere.
Well done 5/5