Wow really strong poem. i lved it. great flow, beautiful diction, simple syntax. Keep it up. Shanik

Kickass stuff about a topic I also feel pretty strongly about ^_^.

Strong rhyme choice, great flow, and I love the chorus (I'm assuming its a chorus). Inspires me to finish the little write I scrapped the other day about the Bailout bs thats been going on. (It wasn't as good as this though, hence why I scrapped it lol).

Great job.

I hate how this country is always looking at how much money you have and thts not power. i hate money. 5/5

Stumbled across your poems and am amazed the thoughts you are writing down and feelings you are able to pen so perfectly.
I think you may have meant reigns not reins but thats okay too. Excellent job dear. But I don't understand why most of your poetry is going into explicit. Would it only accept it that way. I have read some really great stuff of yours that would just classify as life and not explicit. I absolutely love your stance on most of it. I am going to keep reading and hope you keep writing.
Take Care,
kay