Comments : Lily

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    There are a couple of suggestions I'd love to offee you. First of all I think it would read better if it was in stanza form. Second of all the title. Though it does go with the poem could be shorter. You could call it little miracle or miracle. Just my opinion. Anyways the poems message is very strong. I believe you are talking about a baby that was being born or it could be a new pet you have received. But by your wording it seems like a baby. It seems like they are your pride and joy and a miracle in your life :). A child is a great joy though I do not have any. It can be a struggle at times but in the end it's so rewarding. Anyways beautiful poem overall

  • 9 years ago

    by Veronica

    Hello how are your doing you are so correct I'm talking about rasing my daughter as a single mom I got on Poetry to open up my thoughts and struggles I go through the only way I express myself is through my writing ,thank for the encourage meet i'm learning ,also with the correct in my sentence

  • 9 years ago

    by Bobby

    A child that depends on you makes life worth living again