The layout of this poem does not usually appeal to me, just because I personally think the short stanzas are easier to read, but somehow I could not take myself away from this poem. I think you have done this in a way which is not off-putting, and you have worded the poem in such a way that it holds the interest of the reader, and I honestly knew I would read to the end, I am glad I did.

Your content is really good, something we can all relate to, and I also really like how you have slowed the pace down, and also shortened the poem towards the end, but at the exact same time, you have built up a climax, a suspense with the questions, and then leave that with the reader. What a great way to end!

good work.