Comments : A stroll in the park

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    So short yet so full of imagery.

    Perfect.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    You encompass the beauty of nature so vividly well in this poem. I love the expression of beauty and the energetic youth and animals enjoying a nice, warm day at the park.

    "The gift of life, such bliss,
    to the warmth of the sun, I blow a kiss."
    ^^
    I love these lines!

    Wonderful imagery throughout and a joy to read :)