Comments : Destiny Behind Masks

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Kaylie,

    I like the format of this poem. The content is inspirational and sounds like it comes from personal experience. Wise words indeed.

    'Behind the mask of society' this suggest that the face we put on is one of conforming, trying to fit in. The poem offers reassurance that being true to oneself is okay. 'Emotions destroy dreams
    So let them out' be yourself and set the truth free.

    Well done, I am sure many will relate to your words.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by kaylie edgington

      Thanks! Yes it was personal experience. I want others to not be afraid to be themselves. Not be afraid to stand out. It is better to be liked when you are being yourself than pretending to be something your not! i have learned this and am happy to say Im not afraid to be myself

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi Kaylie,

    You have a unique writing technique that really works and keeps me gripped all the way through. I like the meaning of the piece that we are all different in our ways and shouldn't hide behind society trying to be the same.
    I believe many people can relate to this piece and those that can't relate to it can be inspired by it.

    Well done. Em